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Touch
The only true sense

Words only mimic
Give impressions of touch
Try to capture the beauty

Sights deceive
Make us believe the impossible
Make us dream

Smells invisible
A mere addition
A cheap parlor trick of the body

Sounds
Try to take us
Make us think
Will us

Touch
The only true sense
The only real way to express
The most beautiful of emotions
Emotions, feelings and thoughts
All other senses distract
Try to take the beauty of touch away
They shall not take it from me
©2008-2009 ~Howling-Wolf-36
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XD gotta be my fav poem out of all the ones I've done, it made me get out the shower 2 write it but whatever ;p

Because touch can show every emotion, from love to friendship to hatred

comments are always appreciated :D
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Mood: Wow! ~shdwdncr245:iconshdwdncr245: May 11, 2008, 8:58:11 AM
Oh my... I LOVE this one. This is really worth a WOW hehe. You don't need words nor speaking to express yourself when you can touch, it says so much bout someones feelings, though you can see a lot in the expressions of a face too. Thanks for sharing!!

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MIND / OPEN 24H
~Howling-Wolf-36:iconHowling-Wolf-36: May 11, 2008, 9:11:48 AM
hehe thanx, i really put allot of effort into it & its gonna be my fav for a while

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The worst thing about humanity is that it destroys what it doesn't understand.
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*Squirrelshters:iconSquirrelshters: May 11, 2008, 5:01:01 PM
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dude, you like, have to be intelligent to write this one. ^^ fan of your writin' man!!!!! *adds as favorite*

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I'm sorry
That's all that I can say
You mean so much and I'd
Fix all that I've done
If I could start again
I'd throw it all away
To the shadows of regrets
And you would have the
Best of me...

-Sum 41

"Don't be afraid... to feel."
~Howling-Wolf-36:iconHowling-Wolf-36: May 11, 2008, 11:13:01 PM
thanks ^-^ *hugs*

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The worst thing about humanity is that it destroys what it doesn't understand.
)........(\_
((.... _/{ "-;
)).-' {{ ;'`
( (. ;._\\
~shdwdncr245:iconshdwdncr245: May 12, 2008, 1:17:23 AM
You're welcome ^-^ :hug:

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MIND / OPEN 24H
*Squirrelshters:iconSquirrelshters: May 12, 2008, 1:10:58 PM
no problem! *huggles back* ^-^

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I'm sorry
That's all that I can say
You mean so much and I'd
Fix all that I've done
If I could start again
I'd throw it all away
To the shadows of regrets
And you would have the
Best of me...

-Sum 41

"Don't be afraid... to feel."
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